Deferred Success
My cousin Phil plays a "song a day" for his 6'th grade music class
that he teaches and expects the students to give a critique. He
recently played my "Deferred Success" track from the record I
completed last year under the alias, Silent Skies. Here is the track
they reviewed along with their reviews:
-I liked the instrumental part.
-It's a little like you're running or going down steps; then stopped
to get a drink of water and met some friends, then all of y'all
started to run slow, slow, fast, slow, fast. Didn't like the melody,
harmony, tone color.
-I liked the beat, the lyrics, the songs, and the guitar sounds, and
the bass in the beat.
-I like it because the tempo sounds nice and the tone color made it unique.
-It wasn't the music I'm used to listening to.
-I liked the melody.
-Don't like it; don't have no cool rhythm; can't understand what he is saying.
-Lyrics-didn't like.
-I didn't like it because the song was too plain. Also it had weird,
non-understandable lyrics.
-The beat.
-I didn't like it because the song was funny and had weird-o lyrics.
Also I didn't like the tone color.
-Different
-I liked the beat, but I don't like the singing cause he can't sing.
-No, I don't like it because of the rhythm and form.
-No, I don't like it cause it's not the kind of music I listen to and
cause of the tone.



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